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eating spring

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I have to eat the spring

Gulp down its green life

Bite the buds

Chew on the writhing stalks

Swallow green energy

I have to eat the spring

 

Winter was a meagre time

An era of starvation

Spring is full and wide and deep

Its promise speaks deliciously to me

 

I have to eat the spring

Nibbling it won’t be enough

I have to make a banquet out of spring

Swallow it whole

No more to gnaw

On winter’s dry old bones

 

Spring snaps me into life

An overflow of burgeoning

And so I have to eat the spring

Devour its mighty song

And let it live within

 

 

 

spring

◄ blackbird's song

a nonpareil ►

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Greg Freeman

Fri 18th Feb 2011 23:24

Touch of the old DH Lawrence about this, methinks

<Deleted User> (7212)

Fri 18th Feb 2011 13:18

Feel the sap rising? Eh ? Eh?

(no - I'm not the sap in question)

<Deleted User> (8730)

Fri 18th Feb 2011 11:35

Nice picture, vivid poem. Life is precious.

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