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Street scenes

On Manchester streets you can see it all

Sit with a coffee and observe the show

In Piccadilly Gardens have a ball

Then have another in Caffe Nero

There’s trams and tramps, there’s beggars (just say no)

There’s cloudy skies and drinks, there’s ciggie smoke

The rumbling thunder of buses that slow

And stop, raining people, so many folk

Some busy, others dizzy. Fizzy Coke

At café prices, with slices of cake

The business people on the make, the calls

Taken on mobiles, a child cries, we go

Those few miles home before we end up broke

Away from the hub of this urban sprawl

Away to suburbs where the pulse is slow

◄ Goldfishfinger

Drowned rat ►

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<Deleted User> (5984)

Thu 10th Jul 2008 09:39

Hey you

I agree with Sarah. i like this poem because it's honest, but it does not seek to degrade the city. With your imagery, you have captured the rawness, without falling upon cliches and stereotypes...
thank you

Mel

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Richard Brooks

Wed 9th Jul 2008 12:16

I live in manchester when I'm uni and all of this is very true! The thing I hate the most is what they've done with OK cafe! It had a nice working man feel to it and now it looks like a tendy wine bar like everywhere else

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 9th Jul 2008 00:58

Hi A, I'm in Nadchester quite a lot and this is a fair tribute (if thats the right word to it) to the place, can't walk down the street without bumping into dozens of people or falling over a coffee table!! cheers Jeff

<Deleted User> (5646)

Tue 8th Jul 2008 23:26

WHAT? You mean smoking is still acceptable in Manky land? Wow, i'll have to pay them a visit!
I love coffee n cake and i live in one of those sleepy suburbs. Except on a Saturday night when all and their brothers turn out too.
(With the odd tramp)
Good one as usual, love Janet.xx

<Deleted User> (5164)

Tue 8th Jul 2008 22:36

loving you poem!

being a manc myself, u describe manchester perfectly

sez x

(hahaha - ''just say no'' )

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