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Noah was here!

 

Noah and his wife were having a bit of a check

Of what was living on top and below the Arc’s deck

He counted the birds at the start of the day

He ran out fingers and toes, then lost his way

 

“It’s no good”, said Mrs Noah, “we will have to see Jack”

“True”, he said, “he’s got room in his house and outback”

So he parked the Arc outside the front of Jacks house

Dropped off a camel, six elephants, a gnu and a mouse

 

© Phil Golding 07/08

◄ Cross the Crimson Tide

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clarissa mckone

Tue 15th Jul 2008 06:22

HI phil, I love this one, light and fun!

<Deleted User> (4281)

Tue 15th Jul 2008 05:57

Hello, Philip

Nice and light poem for a change, it was fun to read this one.
I could picture the entire scenarios in my mind.
Sounds like a great fun with the pets!

GREAT WRITE!

Thank you for your lovely comment on my poem.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

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Philip Golding

Sun 13th Jul 2008 23:53

Thanks Janet, I wrote it for my 9 year old son, Jack for his homework, tomorrow and the multitude of pets we have. The only sad thing was that the camel died last weekend.

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Sun 13th Jul 2008 23:28

This reminds me of " hickory, dickory dock."
Very "enlightened," if you'll pardon the pun.
Janet.x

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