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shake the bottle

Shake the bottle

My contents have settled
And I sloth
On sofas
Used to be a bag of beans
A golf ball goafer
But now
I drive the chauffeur
Home
A chaperone
On a throne of flammable foam
My wife occasionally shakes me up
To find life on a misty cup
Of lager lips and tannin muck
The tummy tuck
That spills over leather belt
Is one less thing
You felt about
Inside me.
Nothing inside
All at the bottom
Two cheeks
My cherry blossom
But I still love you
When you stare right through
Or go to straight bed
In the holy zoo
I call our home.
a vacant good night kiss
Bypass the carpet burn
And the lino floor
Put the cat out recycle
Bin bag duty
Domestic icicle
Cold.
Love you
Love.

◄ love after lost love

this, the killing field ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Wed 16th Jul 2008 11:06

The joys of wedded bliss. Ha! my ass!
Makes me glad i'm not married. Still gotta do those boring things like putting out the bin and whilst the carpet burns stung, the memory of how they came to be brings a smile to my face.

Enjoyed this one Pete. love Janet.x

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clarissa mckone

Wed 16th Jul 2008 03:42

HI Pete,
Wow a domestic Icicle, what a treat to have one! frozen or thawed? I had to laugh out loud upon reading this one, great stuff, do tell us what a fridgid female she is.

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