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Escape

 

She is a sweet doll, three tiers high,

a nipped in, ivory dumbbell.

Her nails, bitten down, flash in the crook

of his arm.

 

She looks duped, evangelical;

her face catching the icing underfoot

a little.  

There is communion.

 

She steps forward, pressing her hand into mine,

our fingerprints, lost in glass -

uniforms, shapes of dust,

her eyes greyed,

 

flat, fish eyes.

We look thin; spaghetti

threading from his mouth,

in one kiss -

 

consumed.

Pale, I fall through her,

and the shop shows

alarm.

escape

◄ The Undertaker

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Thu 12th May 2011 15:12

maybe I am a mannequin staring out - with a flash of reality...ha, thanks Cynthia.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 12th May 2011 14:51

Are you staring at a mannequin in a shop window - with a flash of memory, or fantasy? Your relationship of ideas never ceases to enthrall me.

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Wed 11th May 2011 12:11

I like it

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