Dawn
You lied about your age,
Your weight and your shoe size.
I found out too late
To halt our demise.
Half truths and whoppers
Comprised your diction.
No facts, just fantasy
And falsehoods and fiction.
This dress? Just ten pounds,
Bought in a sale.
If your nose was Pinocchio’s
It would run off the scale.
You deceived and destroyed me
At every wrong turn.
Took wallet and dignity
And left me, heartburned.
So I’m both broke and broken
At the first light of morn.
In more than one way,
You were another false dawn.
Jeff Dawson
Sat 19th Jul 2008 11:42
Hi Mark, well written, really enjoyed this although I hope you're over what happened, doesn't sound good! When I read it though apart from the deceit there still seems some hurt about your loss, it's happened though and you can't change it. Keep up the good writing! Jeff