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Pictures of you at the ocean
and when I saw them
They made me think your in love.
I can’t hate you for it,
You deserve a warm body to hold on to
As much as you deserve Paris in the springtime.
I wish you butterflies and dirty dreams
And kisses in the fall.
I like it, the regretful tone with the lovely last two lines.
I'm in the same boat here as Jules in particular the last two lines although you may have a few too and's in the last few lines for my personal liking..
<Deleted User> (8730)
Fri 20th May 2011 04:35
I like it. It reminds me of someone who I know who I miss
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<Deleted User> (7212)
Mon 23rd May 2011 18:21
ditto - great poem