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Obsession equals self-obsession

Obsession equals self-obsession

 

Winds stir old words along the morning’s empty street

Post-it notes disguised as rainy day receipts

Some read ‘I love you’ others ‘Notice me!’

All trampled underfoot with necessary cruelty

 

These are the words that once unwound inside of me

A mind and tongue that railed against pathetic fallacy

Now tied to it – shadows bind truth to fettered memory

And shine on scattered letters where pleas threaten bribery

 

The wind and the rain and the paper coalesce

Grabby thoughts reduced to nought – vandalised, distressed

All that they’re fit for – at their very best

Greed and egoism drown in torrents unrepressed

 

Desires this inclement can only lead to grief

And from that hope and reason must oust such false belief

To confuse love with approval is counterfeited wealth

When the riches of serenity can be found within one’s self

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 23rd Jul 2008 13:22

Excellent Steve, love the first 4 lines - good to see you at Freedup, cheers Jeff

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Daniel Hooks

Tue 22nd Jul 2008 19:56

really good poem and piece of advice. I will Carry with me! thankyou Steve!

Pete Crompton

Mon 21st Jul 2008 21:41

"To confuse love with approval is counterfeited wealth

When the riches of serenity can be found within one’s self"



this is a very clever poem, its complete and honest, you have took yourself apart Steve.

another tightly written honest piece of work, I can relate to it, I find it slightly disturbing. I like the paper coalesce idea.

its all very good. quality.
thanks for putting this up

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