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My Love

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I will gather breeze in my palms,

I will hold the wind in my arms,

I will pick you up on my wings,

I will get you free of bitter things.

 

All my tenderness will be an ocean,

I will show you all my devotion,

I will smooth out your old wounds,

You will hear new beautiful tunes.

 

I will make you feel drunk,

I will make you find your spunk,

I will change the darkness into the light,

I will make all your days bright.

 

I need you, my darling, so much.

I want to feel always your touch,

I would love to give you all,

To share with you the fall.

 

Let a beautiful song blow up the quiet

And the whole world would be admired!

I would like to challenge time

And listen to the bells chime.

 

© Copyright Larisa Rzhepishevska

May 29th, 2011 (Odessa, Ukraine)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Wed 1st Jun 2011 12:26

Oh, nooooooo!!!!!!!!!!! I didn't mean any sexual undertones here. I wanted to show how beautiful and romantic a real love could be.

<Deleted User> (8730)

Wed 1st Jun 2011 12:09

I like the structure and the sexual undertones.

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