haiku
A bowl of broth in an ocean washes thinly on a wasting shore
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<Deleted User> (5646)
Wed 23rd Jul 2008 22:03
Wow!
Even without the picture, the images would have been profound.
Janet.x
<Deleted User> (4281)
Wed 23rd Jul 2008 01:11
Hello, Carol
This is a compact Haiku poem. Thoughts are quite philosophical, almost on time with the prices that are rocket high all over the World.
Thank you,
Zuzanna
darren thomas
Tue 22nd Jul 2008 15:41
Hi Carol, like all great Haiku, the more I read this, the larger and more intense it becomes.
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Jeff Dawson
Wed 23rd Jul 2008 22:46
Hi Carol, I've never heard of Haiku, will have to google it! interesting concept and very thought provoking statement, Jeff