Manchester Morning
Manchester Morning
And in the distance
A watery sun
Climbs ponderously
Above the Pennines.
Manchester Morning
Railway stations buzz
As iPods arrive
Accompanied by
Their sleeping owners.
Manchester Morning
Shops slowly open
With early temptings
Of frothy coffee
And warming bagels.
Manchester Morning
Trams clank cheerfully
Across the city,
Heavy with workers
All dressed as wage slaves.
Manchester Morning
Offices light up
Buses swarm like bees
Telephones ring loud,
A city wakens.
John Togher
Tue 14th Jun 2011 12:40
Some good lines in this - ipods, trams clank. Not sure about the image of the buses swarming like bees, though. Doesn't work for me. Other than that, evocative of the city morning.