If
A disembodied voice was in my ear
with layered tones I never did expect
to come from her. Its sound was full, sincere,
with laughter there and always star-bedecked.
To dance upon those suns in playful praise
produced in me a joy I hadn't known
for many moons of empty mournful days —
at last, my melancholy overthrown.
But while that fluted palette fills my mind
some other, lower, thought assails my smile
(becoming with our tryst now intertwined)
which will not with desire be reconciled:
If she were not now with somebody else
I'd gladly give to her all of myself.
<Deleted User> (8943)
Sun 19th Jun 2011 09:52
Such melancholy, lovely phrases, "fluted palette", "thought assails my smile"
This is well written & flows nicely, a lovely read, thanks...