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Sporting Success in spite of Rain

A leaden London cloudscape's gown of grey

Greets me this morning on my way to work;

Even the swooping swallows cannot break

A creeping lethargy this dismal day.

A tube strike looms, a shadow in the sky

That soon will wreck the hectic working week

And add more torture to the tiresome trek

As cramped commuters wend their weary way.

But cheer up, chaps - there's Wimbledon ahead

And Rory McIlroy has played his part;

The test team were terrific, though the rain

Seemed set to kill a series win stone dead.

Just hope that Andy Murray has the heart

So we can hail a Champion again.

◄ Send in the Clowns

After the Summer Fayre ►

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C Richard Miles

Sat 25th Jun 2011 23:00

Thanks, John. Nice to have you comment on one of my musings (especially as listening to some of your poems was one of my inspirations to join this site).
I do get waylaid into the sonnet form far too often for my liking, although as for knowing what I am doing - I do now, but some of my early attempts at sonnets scribbled on the bus (like many of my poems) were a bit of a mixture of Petrachan and Shakespearean as I'd forgotten the correct rhyme scheme for a sonnet and it was too tricky to rejig them!

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd Jun 2011 09:21

Excellent! A sonnet! And with faithful structures too, complete with 9th line turn.
(I suspect you know what you're doing, C).
Really enjoyed the contemporary subject and sporting references within such a conventional form.
I must check more of your stuff.

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