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THE ATTIC

The Attic holds such fascination

I climb the ladder in trepidation

The attic is a time machine

Most things hidden and unseen

I lift the hatch and take a peak

The old rocking chair begins to creak

Dust coats the old wooden chest

The lid embossed with a crest

All the games of yesteryear

In the corner uncles spear

Boxes piled with books and photos

Most containing all my heros

Snakes and ladders, ludo, lots of games

They belonged to my brother James

Oh! look my old train set

On the ledge fathers old cornet

A place where I can come and dream

Oh!  just  hit my head on the beam

Underneath the old guitar

Just found my 007 car

I think I'll go I'm getting mellow

Maybe I'll return tomorrow

I descend the ladder and close the hatch

Just for now I'll watch the match.

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 22nd Jun 2011 21:22

Hi Hazel.As promised I have put a comment for you on my attic poem.To read,click on my name under 'Recent comments' on the right hand side of the blogs.Hope you like.Many thanksStef.x

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Hazel

Wed 22nd Jun 2011 16:11

A bit like my bedroom as well but with gollies substituted Ann thanks.

Please do put it on Stefan Thanks.

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 22nd Jun 2011 05:31

Sounds like my bedroom Hazel! Just substitute lead farm animals for the 007 car. Nice poem!

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 22nd Jun 2011 00:42

Very funny Hazel.I did a poem on the same subject back in 2009-I shall put it on over the next few days and see what you think.Best regards to you-Stef.x

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