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What will today bring? - By Belinda Johnston

What will today bring?

Watery eyes

A thousand breaths: one hearty

sigh.

Soft words, phone calls made -

hastiness undone: a new deed laid.

Clitter clatter of uniformed heels,

one gentle smile: happiness sealed.

What will today…

 

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Andy N

Mon 25th Aug 2008 20:29

there is a huge amount of pathos in this, but i don't think it is overdone in the slightest! Lovely!!

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Sat 2nd Aug 2008 19:30

a lovely poem Belle, the content and your style shows that Japan is making your poetry flower blossom.

Letter on way

Much love

Mel

xxx

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