white knights
White nights joust on the hill
Spoiling for a fight
And in a lonely cottage
I turn on the light.
Comments
Small is beautiful (well, at least perfectly formed!).
enjoyed the shortness of this piece, Ann.. top banana! Andy N x
revisited this again. this time sober. Its still brilliant! Win x
<Deleted User> (7212)
Sun 24th Jul 2011 21:32
I thought you might have pulled out a candle.... perhaps I'll rephrase that :)
Philipos
Sun 24th Jul 2011 19:44
A very interesting take on wind turbines 'jousting eh?' from static positions. Liked your other end of the wire scenario too.
I dare you to write one about a solar panel!
Ah, the latest round in our turbines challenge? this is much better thsn my effort. White nights, love it. Win x
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sat 23rd Jul 2011 20:38
reference to Don Quixote? nice and neat-short'n'sweet -ta-S.W.x
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Ann Foxglove
Mon 25th Jul 2011 10:13
Poetry sure is weird. This took about thirty seconds to pop into my head. My poor old Whitechapel Ladies took ages to try and sort out, record etc but didn't get much response (but thanks Stef and Johnxx). I'm happy to get no comments or one comment or loads of comments, I'm not grumblin' but it just seems inhexpliccabable to me. :)