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Heptonstall Chapel

These stones have stood two hundred years and forty more

And scan Hardcastle Crags across from Heptonstall,

Hoist high above the Hebble's ferny forest's floor

But they may fall.

 

Though Wesley preached to hundreds in this hallowed place,

This wayside chapel, gaunt-boned, gritstone octagon

Whose generations worshipped, prayed and gained God’s grace,

May soon be gone.

 

As congregations dwindle and are raked by age,

Whilst gnarled, arthritic hands now tend each grassy grave

And strive against time’s tyranny and rainstorm’s rage,

Can faith still save?

 

Can centuries of care and whispered, well-meant prayer

Maintain the mystery, uphold the crumbling span

Of heritage and heaven now mingled seamless, there?

We hope they can.

 

This ancient place where Methodists have lived and died

Might bear the brunt of faithlessness and storm-cloud’s ill

But, with the wealth of well-wishers and local pride,

May prosper still.

 

Let not this sacred place, this humble, holy spot

Succumb to selfishness and grasping greed

And fail the test of time, and crumble, rust and rot:

There is no need.

 

No dire developer must foster foolish plans

And dare to spoil this site where faithful feet have trod:

The architect who forms the future in his hands

Must just be God.

 

For He, whose love caused man to mould these moorside walls

Shall surely wield His will and summon strength, which slept,

To save and succour, so this gem of Heptonstall’s

Will be safe kept.

 

And, with strong will and sheer determination’s drive,

As, keeping hold on history, throughout our land

New flames of faith faint flicker, kindle, come alive:

These stones shall stand.

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John Coopey

Thu 18th Aug 2011 11:16

You're the Boss, CRM. Keep posting.
(Have you thought of putting them to audio? The site needs them in mp3 format. I think this would be even better performed than read.)

Philipos

Wed 17th Aug 2011 17:18

Great atmosphere recreated CRM - elegaic and evocative of Gray's famous poem. You paint a highly descriptive picture of the place and the sad charm of its dereliction. My first published poem was of such a setting.

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C Richard Miles

Tue 16th Aug 2011 21:07

Thanks, John, glad you liked the atmosphere - thought I'd submit another Calderdale Poem having visited the other week - I'm afraid you'll have to get used to my over-alliteration - seemed to creep in constantly when I started writing, as did rather a lot of internal rhyme & is now an established feature of my style. Unfashionable perhaps, but I'm not renowned for being fashionable in many areas of life!!

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John Coopey

Tue 16th Aug 2011 20:06

Excellent poem in alexandrines, CRM. Difficult to do. On first reading the lines seem as though they should end sooner (or continue for a couple more syllables). But I got the flavour after a second reading. I assume the final lines should be slow-read to set it down.
Lovely atmosphere created, although some of the alliteration seemed a bit overcooked for my taste.
(I'm being hyper-critical. I wish I'd written it!)

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