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Always nice at first Out for whatever you can get I'm well aware now No one will take from me anymore My loss or yours?

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Lizzie

Sun 21st Aug 2011 07:05

Thanks for all your wonderful comments :)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 20th Aug 2011 21:28



"my loss or yours?

-a very fair and understanding question
methinks.

good,short burst.

thanks.

Stef.

<Deleted User> (7212)

Sat 20th Aug 2011 18:38

well observed - we all "learn our lessons" from life's mistakes, but that in itself is generally a mistake IMHO as it closes too many doors. First & foremost, we're not girls & boys, men & women, black & white - we're people - all individuals. just my 2 cents. B

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Isobel

Sat 20th Aug 2011 17:28

The title works well as a draw... hard not to want to know what the poem is about.

It's a very raw one but I kind of like the starkness - the baldness of what you are saying.

I think it is his loss and your loss only if you allow it to be. I would file him under 'tosser' and carry on having fun in life. Life is just too short to let one person ruin it for you. The love game is a cruel hard one. Develop a thick skin - allow someone in emotionally once you have known them long enough to develop trust. If it all goes pair shaped, start over...

That is my philosophy on life - it's taken a little time and life experience to develop it :)

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