the dead done gone and did it again
the dead done gone and did it again
the dead done gone and shredded your heart
the dead will whistle their one refrain
the dead they tear your song apart
the dead done gone and shredded your heart
the dead paid the piper but forgot the tune
the dead they tear your song apart
the dead will be your playmates soon
the dead paid the piper but forgot the tune
the dead march on to a different drum
the dead will be your playmates soon
the dead enjoy vicarious fun
the dead march on to a different drum
the dead they freely waste your time
the dead enjoy vicarious fun
the dead done gone and ripped the rhyme
the dead they freely waste your time
the dead will whistle their one refrain
the dead done gone and ripped the rhyme
the dead done gone and did it again
John Coopey
Mon 22nd Aug 2011 23:11
Enjoyed this a lot Russell.
Not an obvious fusion - rap and pantoum, but no question that it works.
Difficult in such short lines to maintain the abab rhyming discipline.