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Edwr and the Hart

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We had no words for “metaphor” or “simile”

That night in the hall; the fire’s smoke

And crackle blazed colour into our faces,

The Skald sang ‘Edwr ran after the hart,

As swift as the river runs’, and that was that.

We feasted on its muscles, lights and guts

Ate ourselves full to stupor, then we drank,

Drenching our lips with honey of the kill;

Drew Edwr on the walls, in pigments, ochres, dung,

His legs always striding, and the spear in flight,

Claiming in effigy the meat that sustained us still.

One of the dogs had not come back

Although the Skald included in his song

Brave deeds of chase and quarry done by it.

 

That first poem was a spell,

That led us ever on, creating pictures

On the walls of our minds, like tapestries,

Rich in shadowy red-browns; stick-men

Running, hunting, feasting, and love-lying

With the women.

 

The missing dog was chanted with the rest, sung

As smoke wreathed chunks of venison, hung

High in the woven wattles of the roof;

Whenever we grew hungry, we would chant

‘Edwr chased the hart, swifter than the river!

Gods, bring us more deer!’ – As long as we believed

The poem was also life, the ritual worked.

 

The Skald grew cunning, making a tale

Of how the dog returned; we roared it out

Around the fire in mead; next day, quite unconcerned

It trotted in, wet  through, much thinner, one ear torn;

We cheered it , as it curled round by the hearth!

 

The Skald wove tales of Edwr fighting giants,

Even the Gods themselves; we could not draw these

We had no walls big enough.

We knew now though fine words could fill our bellies;

We’d chant in lofted rhymes for food, and nowadays

The Gods would oblige, always

Edwr would run through the forest, again and again,

His legs always astride, dogs always following

At heel, spear always in mid-flight.

Laughing and quaffing, we traced that drawing

Over and over on the walls of our memory

Toasting, and roasting: the smell of meat

And mead; howling to the Skald’s bare lyre

Whenever we were gathered round the fire

Singing of Edwr and the hart,

And the lay of the lost dog.

 

Isle of Arran, August 2011.

 

 

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Philipos

Wed 31st Aug 2011 22:38

A lot of input here and resonating especially with my recent reading of The Vikings. Enjoyable read.

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John Coopey

Mon 29th Aug 2011 22:21

Very evocative, Steve. Ripping good read.

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Steve Rudd

Mon 29th Aug 2011 16:23

Hello Cynthia

"Lights" in this context = lungs, part of the offal or "umbles" of the deer that the ordinary proles ate while the hobnobs got to eat venison.

Thanks for your comments. The poem was inspired by having just spent three weeks on the Isle of Arran with more neolithic monuments than you could shake a stick at, and of course strong Viking connections (King Haakon quartered his fleet in Lamlash Bay in 1264 prior to the battle of Largs) While we were there, we lost the dog (she turned up again) and spent a lot of time round the camp fire (but not eating chunks of dead animals) and I guess it all came out in the wash...

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 29th Aug 2011 15:09

I really enjoyed this. The mood is true right through, filled with provocative detail that creates the developing scene and dynamic energy of the men. What are the deer's 'lights'. Eyes, maybe? Photo is very humourous.

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