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The Chants Of Insects

It occurs in the slur of morning

When the birds have been fed

And survivors of the feast

Wriggle and squeak on the surface.

 

Bits of insects roll and search

For pieces of themselves

In the bloodwet grass

As the sun bursts.

 

Waiting for the rain

To soothe and manoeuvre

Those that are left

Chanting on the grass.

 

But they are not afraid

Of what is above

As they creep and slither

Never failing, never looking up.

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 22:53

were u a worm in a former life??u hv a secret connection 2 them i feel lol brill hun xx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 1st Sep 2011 20:47

Brilliant perspective. And I love the endless possible scenarios that could be considered, using this piece as pure metaphor.

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Andy N

Thu 1st Sep 2011 13:13

good pace in this again, Kealan. I wish I could write them as powerful and as quick as you are at the moment...

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Wed 31st Aug 2011 15:21

I really enjoyed this. x

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