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Euphrasia

The light there cools blue streaks

As it climbs the side of the hill.

She has her drawing pad and brushes

And slinks her way up.

 

At the top the view

Is neither proof nor reduction

That the world is still alive.

 

She begins to paint anyway

Quick flicks of the brush

Ascending scars of blue and green

Listening to the wind,

Waiting for the landscape to show her

All things are redeemed.

 

But then the brush stops

And the air gives up.

She sees no image on the page

In her fifth year of blindness.

 

But she still imagines.

◄ The Censored Sky Of The City

Ever After ►

Comments

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Laura Taylor

Fri 9th Sep 2011 13:33

Expert sting in the tail there Kealan, nicely written

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Andy N

Fri 9th Sep 2011 08:02

last line works well there particularly, kealan but I enjoyed the full piece.. A

Philipos

Thu 8th Sep 2011 18:37

Gosh powerfully thought-provoking. A blind lad where I live is always braving traffic in our busy streets. I hope his angels never have a day off. Enjoyed.

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Lynn Dye

Wed 7th Sep 2011 20:35

Very touching and thoughtful poem, Kealan. I enjoyed it.

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