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My Fall and His Grace

 

 

My sin hangs Him back on the cross,
And the traitor of Heaven clings to me.
I swallowed a little poison out or pleasure,
And my soul towards Him staggers to reach Him.
I let my soul stroll in filth and dirt,
And have carried the mud with me shrouded.
I look like a toad croaking from the ditch,
And I see Him invisibly looking at me,
And He shows His distorted countenance.
I cry unto Him with His Words writ,
And my soul weeps till its tears dry.
I've learnt His blood hath cleansed my soul,
And I can be back with Him with His strength and grace,
And what I long for is to live and to die for Christ.
 

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Laura Taylor

Wed 21st Sep 2011 11:27

Know what this reminds me of? Southern Gothic literature...and Nick Cave's idea of it, plus a singer called Michael J Sheehy - heard of him?

It's hanging heavy with the shame, the guilt, can almost feel the heat haze.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 20th Sep 2011 20:11

hi MBJ.
this poem
would go down very well
at the drop-in centre for the homless
-little chapel service
that we attend every thursday.

the people who run it
work unbelievably hard.

look forward to your next poem.
thanks.

Patricia and Stef Wilde

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