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A Light Ahead

A long time ago,
I was told
to forget the dream,
and for too long
a time,
I let it wither and die.
And as the years slowly
fell away,
I merely drifted
across the bow
of life,
and the arrow never
was fired
into the heart
of a dream
now beating strong
within me.
And those that told me
to let that dream go
finally have opened their eyes
to see the talent
that I keep,
but they tell me
to keep my head
above water
and not so far
into the skies above.
And I understand their worry.
I do not want to remain a ghost,
voiceless to my dream,
and I do not want to get lost
under the weight of the world.
So, somehow, someway,
I walk
a fine line between both,
and I'll still give life
to dreams
still within
now lighting the way ahead.

A Light Ahead
by, Melissa R. Mendelson

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 7th Sep 2008 21:05

Wonderful Melissa, really got something out of this, need to read it again!! Jeffarama!

<Deleted User> (4281)

Fri 5th Sep 2008 23:28

Dear Melissa

Great way of expressing and presenting your dreams; One shall never quit dreaming as they become reality in the future. You poem is very inspiring!! I really like how you wrote your true feelings from your heart. Thank you for sharing!

Have a great weekend!
Zuzanna

<Deleted User> (4446)

Fri 5th Sep 2008 18:36

keep those dreams alive and keep going with your great poems.

<Deleted User> (5646)

Thu 4th Sep 2008 23:44

Hi Melissa,
We all need dreams. Sometimes, that's what keeps us going.
But i love the part about our heads not staying too high up in the clouds. Those falls back to earth can be mighty painful.

Love and light, Janet.xx

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Moira

Thu 4th Sep 2008 22:17

Live the dream Melissa for we are the stuff of dreams, stardust and starlight and words are peculiarly in our gift.
From far cries accross the forest and mountain top to the cyber babble of our everyday telegraphy..to write is a dream shared and gifted and to dream without record is to die!
Love this 'account' poem and so glad the arrow is free the bow to the very heart of your rightful dream

write on!

Moira

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