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UNCHAIN ME

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Unchain me
Save me
From my own
Tarnished beliefs

Unchain me
Stained me
Please someone refrain me
Victim of my own deceits

Unchain me
Suffocate me
Deadly love of no retreats
Deadly love composed of beats
Deadly love
Feel my heat
Feel my scare
Feel my plea
You who allowed me to breathe
From blinded eyes you showed me a way to see
Through truth and lies you helped me escape hypocrisy
You who enabled me to be

Sacrifice
Hold the knife
Sharp and steady
Taste the blood
Drip for drop
Run through this heart of wood

Soul is cold
Hold the key
Soul grows old
Unlock me

Unchain me
Stained me
Please someone refrain me
Victim of my own deceits

DING MY DONG !!!! ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5466)

Tue 9th Sep 2008 10:10

Reflective and searching...and your writing unchains words and worlds! POWER!

Ieuan Cilgwri

Sun 7th Sep 2008 14:47

I felt this was an excellent account of self examination, delusion AND discovery.

I like the economic use of words, makes it very pointy.

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