Dream lover
If I stop drinking completely I find
The noisy neighbours deprive me of sleep
I become super-sensitive; they wind
Me up as I lie listening; they creep
Around, bang things and each other; they keep
Me from the point of drifting down the stream
Away from this dull, marshy plain to steep
And heady slopes where success is no dream
Gold nuggets just for me reflect the gleam
Of the still-rising sun, caressing wind
Undressing beauties, clothing in a heap
I lie at the top, position supreme
Then a bang in the night and I unwind
Unreeling, rolling through the real snow
<Deleted User> (4281)
Sat 27th Sep 2008 04:51
Hello, Antonio
The poem is good. I found your imagination quite amazing and also amusing! The creative site of you shows well in this imaginary write.
It sounds at the last lines as you had some fan at night that put you at ease...Lol:)
Correct me if I am wrong...OK?
I like the style in your Sonnets!
Thank you,
Zuzanna