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Hidden World Unknown

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Some roads lead to nowhere

You just stand in the middle

Looking for a way out, but then

"What if I stayed here?”

 

You need to clear your mind

No need to compromise

Let the view be hidden

Choose silence to maintain pleasure,

 

Drag yourself to imagination

No need to give any explanation

Don't control these innermost thoughts

Just listen to your vision calls,

 

Let the scene be into yourself alone

Do seek for your hidden world unknown

Fulfill this madness of yours

Rise to perfection, where each desire glows.

 

◄ Forgive Me

Moment of craziness ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 23rd Aug 2010 11:47

This is terrific, a journey of searching and finding within a tight, well-constructed work. Outstanding, IMO, is 'Drag yourself to imagination' among others. I had not yet joined WOL when you wrote this. Some of your later stuff seems different somehow.

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 16th Sep 2008 17:11

Hi Mirna, good to see you back with some thought provoking poems, best wishes Jeff

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Fri 12th Sep 2008 19:09

Hello Mirna,
lovely to see you posting your poems again.
I love the upliftment in this one.
Hope it reflects how you feel.
love Janet.x

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Alison Mary Dunn

Thu 11th Sep 2008 20:01

The road to 'Inner Peace' expressed so well in your words. I enjoyed this poem

Pete Crompton

Thu 11th Sep 2008 09:52

Some roads lead to nowhere

You just stand in the middle

Looking for a way out, but then

"What if I stayed here?”


good philosophical point!

the problem is not where we are all heading, it is where we all stay.

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