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our treasured friends

Our treasured friends
One by one they disappear
In a slowly closing down world
Cancer curls the edges
Of our salad days
And takes another away
The remainder
Group closer together
And sway
Collectively
we notice
The breeze increasingly colder
Hugging each other ever harder
Staining each others shoulder
With our streaming faces
For the missing
For the passing
Yet another part of us dies
Clutching in desperation
As though now on borrowed time
No longer the child like mind
When everything was invincible
Embracing
Find comfort in what remains
For that is all we have
Everyone left around us
Ever more the valuable
Increasingly appreciated
In ever decreasing circles
And every moment precious
The passing remind us
that
We are one day closer ourselves




For Rick Wright, September 2008


◄ I do like your bag, Lynda

*not a poem ►

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Francine

Sun 17th May 2009 18:36

Beautiful...

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 24th Sep 2008 18:50

One day closer indeed, live it to the full, a fitting tribute Pete, cheers Jeff

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clarissa mckone

Fri 19th Sep 2008 02:18

HI peter,
Sorry to hear a friend has passed away. Friends have a way of doing that, and we miss them. Its best to spend time with them when they are alive, so they know you really care. I hope you are ok xx clarissa

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Tony Walsh

Thu 18th Sep 2008 23:17

Hi Pete

Sorry to hear of your loss. You've done your friend proud. Some lovely lines - "decreasing circles" especially.

Thanks for your comment on my slam win in Ireland.

Cheers

Tony

Pete Crompton

Thu 18th Sep 2008 16:07

Richard, Thank you!

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Richard Brooks

Thu 18th Sep 2008 11:23

I really do admire your poems, obviously written from the heart. I can feel your loss. Take care

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