Hiya,
I was disappointed to miss the Poetry Brew. Here are the haiku's I wrote for the occasion. And although haiku traditionally address nature- mine are on human nature.
oh office affair
leaving pregnant wife at home
poor her, lucky you
can't have must have ex
goodbye-sex a mountain peak
valley follows this
raining after work
borrow a nice umbrella
harried leave on train
<Deleted User> (5646)
Sat 4th Oct 2008 12:49
Hi Louise,
Your Haiku's brought a little smile of knowing about modern living.
Sorry you missed it Thursday.
Hope to see you next time.
Love Janet.xx
The main thing about haiku is there should have a wow factor but these are rather subdued.
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darren thomas
Sun 5th Oct 2008 14:56
Yeah, c'mon Louise, these are very lame for Haiku - buck up!