Paradise ignored
Hellbound and spiralling down down down
there can be no earthly hope
and nothing is absolved
the Yazidi manifestation of Melek Ta’us
ironically a bird of paradise
perches here on shed roofs
displays like the halos of angels fallen
you can tell me in the words of Anton La Vey
rules laid down by fools for fools
we do what we damn well like
and will worship devils in our own damned way
we have no need of church
or someone to preach
we evangelise not and each to their own
by the banks of the Tigris where Lalish stands
by the tomb of Shaykh Adi tranquil
in the valley hewn by Shaytan
akin to Jinn Iblis of the later coming devotees of Ali
who surround this lovely place
tear up and smash everything
burn every god mantra symbol and live for this day
<Deleted User> (5984)
Sun 5th Feb 2012 12:49
I really like this poem Mr Glennon, as always, you offer your own original twist on traditional structure. I like the naming of places, it gives you a sense of 'being there'. Despite the content, the poem has undertones of optimism, with words such as 'lovely', 'Paradise', 'angels' and 'halos'. And I agree with Kealan, the last line works perfectly. x