9 Lov
It reads:
"Love hates those who fail to follow.
It alienates those incapable by mind or form to obtain it
Therefore love is a dictatorship.
I am leaving you, he him, for the monk
You know the one.
I got funky with God and burnt my feet.
Please refrain from caring about me
and never trust a man in robes.
PS thanks for the leg."
He him sits clinchfisted sniffing ink
A real big thinker
'love lasts longer for losers'
As one prophet echoed
'broken hearts are for assholes.'
Laura Taylor
Fri 2nd Mar 2012 10:34
I had to go right back to the leg montage one again after reading this!
Well - I'd disagree about the love thing, but then I WOULD say that, wouldn't I?! I'll report back again if it all turns to shit hehe ;D
I love the inclusion of the letter device - always liked epistolary form....Dracula...Sonny's Letter etc. It's a really useful and interesting device, puts a refreshing take on it all.
'I got funky with god and burnt my feet' and 'ps thanks for the leg' - ha - brilliant!
'sniffing ink' - reminiscent of the green ink mouse whispers in leg montage
Excellent series Kealan, have really enjoyed it. Will there be any more or is this the concluding one?