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Bungee Jump

 

Won’t get me up there, can’t get me to try,
Looking down a ravine, from a mile up in the sky,
What’s heady for some, is nothing for another
A bit of bungee jumping, said my big brother.
 
With rubbers attached to my trembling feet
Whatever possessed me to take that leap,
I jumped into the future, at the blink of an eye
Like a flash of lightning, my life passed me by.
 
Now the thrill is over, hanging upside down in the air
I swallowed my pride and I did it for a dare,
Alone at the end of it , just getting my breath  
In future, I’ll leave it, to those who don’t fear death..
 
© Hazel 2012
 

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<Deleted User> (10123)

Wed 7th Mar 2012 12:16

Good go at the feelings. Wonder if you'd like to try 'iamb': the soft - strong beats along the lines? (dee-dum, dee-dum, etc...)
Liked it. Ta much.

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