Dear all;
Some of may have heard this, but I had a new poem 'From a midnight train (Bolton)' performed at Bolton's annual best of bolton night at the Octegon Theatre and somewhat later, the poem has now been published here - http://ink-sweat-and-tears.blogharbor.com/blog/_archives/2012/3/3/5009421.html
Why not have a peek and tell me what you think.
Cheers
Andy N
cheers Nick, Harry and Lynn for your comments. Took a while this piece, but am pleased with the end result and glad you liked it x
<Deleted User> (10123)
Wed 7th Mar 2012 12:09
Start at the end, as is my bent:
'onslaught of the night' great imagery why save it to the end? Your choice entirely.
Metaphoric explosions ripple the entire:
'dances on the diamonds' 'walk across acoustics' Good, strong work. Keep 'em comin', Or Else!!! Ta much.
(if only I could spell! I'd be a better speller)
Particularly liked the last two stanzas, but would have liked it to end on some sort of reference to the train
Good work though
congratulations!
Good one, Andy. Enjoyed.
cheers guys.. means a lot - a important stepping stone in my work - something i hope will lead into something major..
<Deleted User> (6292)
Sun 4th Mar 2012 12:57
Very enjoyable Andy, vivid imagery and a well constructed and balanced poem.
Very well done
Hope to see you soon.
Augusta xx
Nice one mate congrats! Proud of the Octagon showcase!
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Andy N
Sun 24th Feb 2013 12:08
the poem has now appeared here folks
http://www.inksweatandtears.co.uk/pages/?p=93