Weeds
WEEDS
“Quietly amazing, when she allows herself to be”,
an early epitaph written
while we are all still here,
“seems such a waste otherwise”.
When asked for memories
I have a day of hot sun and wasps,
an image from behind,
picking vaguely at garden things,
straw hat for a head.
Peacefully anonymous, blending into the border,
a wash of bright red, watercolour poppy heads,
a blurring of charcoal lines
with a smudged third finger,
lawn of moss and dead-headed catkins discarded,
beds a struggle of competing colour.
Somewhere deep, she wanted to plan
and landscape the plot,
yet never had time.
She was loved for this subtle chaos
but didn’t know it.
“Learn to like weeds”, she would say,
“they are just flowers growing in the wrong place”.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sat 14th Apr 2012 14:12
This is a good poem with a fine theme. For myself, I found stanza 1 a poem in itself, and not really essential to the 'gardening imagery' of the other three stanzas, the crux of your idea. In stanza 3, I suggest a little reworking of adjectives (or elimination of some) eg. 'a wash of watercolour poppies' and substituting another word for 'colour' in the final line. Your diction has captured a sympathetic portrait and a great mood. Always with respect.