Flirtation

When April's sun shines and sings
there's a certain merry mischief
in the precise deft unfolding
of every pale green leaf.

Even world weary hearts dance
as late winter’s shadows lift,
exulting in a stolen chance
to unwrap a precious gift

To hear another's breathing,
to catch a hidden smile,
to see a return in a leaving,
is to dance while life is fragile.

A finest moment stretches
into the fullest hour,
which in turn then reaches
a week, a month, a year.

A life so large it must be lived,
can't waste a precious day
while earth's colours are still vivid
we must take time to play.

 

 

 

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Robert Mann

Mon 30th Apr 2012 19:54

Alison,
I would personally change the last stanza slightly - I don't like the scanning of lived and vivid. How about;
A life so bright, never livid, etc.
Just a suggestion, as I really like the rest of the poem a great deal.

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winston plowes

Wed 11th Apr 2012 21:50

Hi Alison. Nice poem. "the precise deft unfolding of every pale green leaf." was a stand out line for me but enjoyed the positivity of the whole, You have not converted me as I believe anyway. lol.

Hey, Chris Hoy did an incredible swoop in the Keirin don't you think and as for the rising star that is Ms Trott, she gave everything and was rewarded.

Win x

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