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The end is nigh, I hope

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I think the time to tell her has now come

In fact it came and went some time ago

But when we don’t talk at all, how d’you drum

Up courage to say what we should both know

We’ve already said goodbye but with no

Words. They are the hardest because they fall

Like seeds on barren soil; they never flow

Except like dirty toilet water. Call

Her, tell her tonight, there’s no need to crawl

There’d be no room beneath her when her tum

Slides over undergrowth; sidewinder, show

True colours, twist and turn, I’ve seen it all

The forked poisonous tongue, rattle and hum

What’s left to argue about? Here I go…

◄ In bed at twilight

Edinburgh Choo-Choo ►

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 7th Dec 2008 18:50

Hi Tone, I thought there was something wrong! hope you're both okay though see ya soon mate

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shoeless

Tue 18th Nov 2008 08:35

Words. They are the hardest because they fall

Like seeds on barren soil;

that lays it bare doesnt it ?
i wonder did you take the last step

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Andy N

Mon 17th Nov 2008 23:44

one of my favs off your sonts, tone.. i know what is going on here (behind the scenes), but it still doesn't dim it's power! good stuff!

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Dave Morgan

Mon 17th Nov 2008 17:33

Antonionio

cracking rhyming scheme.

Dave

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Mon 17th Nov 2008 15:38

wow that was great
you do have a fantastic way with words

even though you have not wrote what happends next..
you kinda know

if you know what i mean lol

sez x

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