No Pansies (for Charlotte)
In a world full of clumsy-coloured periscopic petals,
we floated macaroons inside
a covered
coloured
glass
She drank her bubbled wine through a flock of flower stems,
drew spoofs of Dodgson’s arty facts
on spines of
rented
books
We sat outside on pincushions; Hensonites by trade
Proceeded to sow seeds of doubt
upon the
crooked
path
I fancied clumsy-pansy soup for our Sunday bruncheon
so Lottie went a-lookin in
a book she
said was
free
But all she found were fallow fields and talking tigerlillies
So came back home, with empty hands
confessed in
shame and
said
“I correct myself, o Laura dear,
there are no pansies there”
(written to include the line “I correct myself, there are no pansies there”, a comment Charlotte Henson made on facecrack during a discussion about pansies, and Lewis Carroll. It tickled me so much I had to pinch the line, and this was the result heh)
Laura Taylor
Wed 30th May 2012 15:42
Hey, cheers fellas
I have no idea what you mean by "its internal logic maintains its integrity", Richie, but I like it ;D
Steve - yeh, one of the first lines I thought of that - no idea where THAT came from ha :D (think I was channelling Victoria Wood or sommat!)