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The Writing Class

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The Writing Class

 

In the writing class we capture memories

Corralled and hobbled like prairie mustangs

We pen them in according to their colour, age and size

Taming them to break their spirits

Forcing them to learn new tricks.

They become our servants docile and less feisty

Hooves shod and harness polished

But deep down we know they will be always wild at heart

They will never truly become what we wish they were

We have turned them into a cabaret

A circus of performing words.

Many come to love the limelight

Can’t wait to promenade before a crowd

But ninety nine percent escape our net

And roam out there unfettered and unbound

Visiting fleetly at dead of night or in the car 

Occasionally crossing our line of vision before

Melting back into their wilderness.

Fleeting memories that will not be roped and broken

By our so-called writer’s craft.

 

◄ Confucian Chronicles

as if by magic... ►

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 7th Dec 2008 19:05

Like it Dave, good stuff! were you on Entwistle Res in the pic? cheers Jeff

Pete Crompton

Wed 19th Nov 2008 00:17

I like the whole wild horses idea.
This is a very vivid poem and instantly conjured some bizarre and fantasy styled pictures in my minds eye, its very rabbit in headlights for me, the rabbit the startled snapshot of thought, not wanting to get tamed, caught or written down, elusive these creature comfort thoughts, the poem has its own edge of frustration built in, I'm assuming, or rather, it seems fitting that the very act of commenting on the creative process and its fragility will be reflected, suppose that was inevitable Dave. Its brilliant and vivid, original and wild. As Julien points out, the intervention taints the purity, however what can we do.

the other beasts that like to be before the spotlight, have you looked deeper into their eyes? seen how scared they really are?

brilliant Dave

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 17th Nov 2008 11:14

Dave, love that 'we pen them in'; recognise your frustration at that duality, the dilemma of trying to capture the essence of something real, but rendering it into artifice through our intervention.

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Val Cook

Mon 17th Nov 2008 10:27

I love your poem,your words bring to life what is creative writing. Some do and some don`t get the bug.

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