tacky falaraky
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I really think this poem needs to be heard rather than read.
I therfore suggest trying the audio link.
a performance poem is only half alive until read aloud.
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Pete Crompton
Mon 8th Dec 2008 00:45
yes, I think youre right, that fine line.............too slow and it loses it, too fast and you lose it ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Excellent! You're obviously used to performing, but nevertheless I think pacing it a touch (only a touch - I like the urgency ... bit on the vicious side)(which is a good thing!) - would make it easier to listen to.
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Pete Crompton
Mon 8th Dec 2008 00:02
yes I'm quite excited by it all Clarissa!
Someone tried to open the door of a package holiday Jet drunk ten miles up, the company went bust and the girl got away with it. Theres me with a parking ticket now metamorphosed into £300 and threat of jail for what? goin ten minutes overtime on a shit house lousy street anyway, the view was no where near as good as being ten miles high and the risk to human life? zero.
thanks for listening
therapy over
no.
: -)
well you sound so excited, I think if I could read it, it may help me, your talking so fast, at times my slow american ears dont understand, whats being said, but could be words that I dont understand, how yall use them. great poem.
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shoeless
Mon 8th Dec 2008 16:15
i love the swifts and starlings on the shoulder blades , its taken me a while to close my mouth though from hearing the rest :) time to go shopping in asda , see you soon x