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Love is an illusion fuelled by hope

Hope is an illusion fuelled by love

The sky is full of ghosts each cloud

A spirit forever trapped in the blue.

 

 

love   sky   ghosts

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nick armbrister

Fri 10th Aug 2012 23:22

thanx John:)

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John Coopey

Fri 10th Aug 2012 22:51

Hello Nick
Enjoyed this.
I liked the juxtapositions of the first 2 lines, but mostly I liked its rhythm.

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