By A River
amidst dewy dawning
and distant lowing
scrambling over
tangled root stone bedding
beneath hillside glowing
from cloud stalked
cold shock
to sun burst warming
flows river umber
running iced tea
tarnished and malty
to this tumble
comes happy dog
snout near rabbit deep
as spooked cottontails peep
from behind mossy log
while hedgerow and tree
with gummy slap
of spittle sprayed sap
shed and share their berry
bees, in silver backed
full droning bluster,
drain all they can muster
before dragons snap
damp ochreous sheep,
like tea-bags spent,
connote what ferments
this tawny creek
steaming hummocks
draw up the eye
to a full weighted sky
where the swifts run amok
through a rising feast
and with like minded purpose
from unddrneath
the bubbling surface is equally policed
soon, though, oh too soon
throughway is blocked
each gateway fast locked
by authority oppugned
from this unfriendly zone
we turn on our heels
and retreat across malachite fields
to man’s enclaves of stone
Poets Corner
Sun 2nd Sep 2012 21:35
Hi Paul....
I love the clarity of this poem...the words and phrases are quite beautiful...they flow...like ' A River'...does...
'..the bubbling surface is equally policed'...
A typo or two...but still a lovely poem.
I would like you to 'tag the poem to 'PC'...that's my Poets Corner facebook page so that I can include it in September entries.
Basically I am featuring between 2 to 4 poems per month...to create and promote a Poet's Poetry..and then at the end of 12 months I will produce a Poets Corner Accomplices (anthology)...at very small cost to the Poet.
Thus promoting WOL...The Poet..Their Poetry and Poets Corner...let me know if you wish to proceed...grahamrobinson73@gmail.com or via PC private chat message...Thanks and Well Done!
Graham.