The Yard
Hi Marianne,
Some lovely phrasing in this:
climbed with mildew, fudged with rain.
The gate is winced in tight;
a red graze, singed with mud.
fat from your windowsill,
the days twisting
like litter
slapped sore with autumn.
Small, yet beautifully formed, as they say. Much enjoyed.
Regards,
A.E.
Best three lines
"the days twisting
like litter
slapped sore with autumn".
Best wishes,
Graham
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Marianne Louise Daniels
Thu 4th Oct 2012 11:45
Thank you for your time and comments, I am humbled by your thoughts x