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The Yard

The weeds are cramped in;
boisterous fingers curved around
empty glass bottles
climbed with mildew, fudged with rain.
 
They shiver –
the frizzing of their hair
swamped with the near October;
a place where yellow sleeps in grey.
 
The gate is winced in tight;
the cord around the bolt,
wet raw. Over the wall
a  tree leans, sodden.
 
There is the porridge scratch
sound of a ball being kicked,
bouncing in a puddle -
a red graze, singed with mud
 
and a boy  who shouts.
A plastic bag is pulled this way
and that,
sacked in the distance
 
of the ice cream van turning
onto a street, the tick
of the engine
waiting.
 
The cold is here;
static and unprepared,
here to stay,
cling silent –
 
fat from your windowsill,
the days twisting
like litter
slapped sore  with autumn.

 

◄ Snow Fox

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Thu 4th Oct 2012 11:45

Thank you for your time and comments, I am humbled by your thoughts x

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Anthony Emmerson

Sun 30th Sep 2012 10:28

Hi Marianne,

Some lovely phrasing in this:

climbed with mildew, fudged with rain.

The gate is winced in tight;

a red graze, singed with mud.

fat from your windowsill,
the days twisting
like litter
slapped sore with autumn.

Small, yet beautifully formed, as they say. Much enjoyed.

Regards,
A.E.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 29th Sep 2012 16:09

Best three lines

"the days twisting
like litter
slapped sore with autumn".

Best wishes,

Graham

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