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Tentless !!

Tina and Brent were camping on Pendle Hill,

They had gone to bed and were lying quite still.

Tina said to Brent,"Look up and what do you see?"

"A sky full of stars looking down at you and me."

Tina turned over and made eye contact with Brent,

"To me it seems like someone has stolen our tent !!!"

◄ Bronislow Kowalski

Deed of the day! ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 7th Oct 2012 00:09

so that couple
were taken down a peg or twelve methinks!

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Lynn Dye

Sat 6th Oct 2012 14:46

Haha, this reminds me of the night I woke up getting rained on because the tent was making its way across the camping field. Retrieved the tent but spent the rest of the wet night sleeping in the car! Fortunately in my earlier days, lol.
Good poem, Hugh.

tony sheridan

Sat 6th Oct 2012 09:34

Another good one! Take care, Tony.

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