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Behind The Facade

Fag breaks out the back,

By overflowing bins.

In those stifling, litter strewn

Rat-runs, never seen by the

Nice folk:

The punters.

A well earned breather from

Minimum wage slavery.

No sinecure here.

 

Switchback passages twist and turn.

Darkly labyrinthine.

Over.

Under.

Around.

Fire escapes and staircases

Leprous through oxidization

And peeling paint,

Exposed to the elements

And bird shit, creak

With the tiredness of age.

 

Faceless: the hidden army

Who would revolt.

Who cook your meals.

Change your sordid bed linen.

Empty your bins and

Clean your smears

Off the pan.

 

Around the back, there

Is no smell

Of fresh paint.

Just body odour

And decay.

 

◄ Holiday Romance

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Adam Warwicker

Fri 12th Oct 2012 16:19

Philipos,
Thanks for your comments. It was based on observations in Bournemouth earlier in the year.
Thanks for the typo alert!

Philipos

Thu 11th Oct 2012 19:08

Hi Adam, nicely written and so descriptive I could almost get the whiffs from those alleyways. Knew such places in London's west end of yesteryear.

And the decay. Yep great contrast with facades of grandeur the ownership would like us to take away.

Must check out your other stuff (you have an unwanted 'a' in 'paint' BTW)

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