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A Poem Is Just Ink in the Shape Of

I'm studying Creative Writing in university, and my first poetry lectures were all about trying to define what poetry is. Personally I found this a bit unnecessary; I've never felt the need to put the entire art of poetry in a box, draw a diagram of it and give a lab report on its composition - it's one of those things you just feel, right? However, in class we were asked to write an Ars Poetica, a poem about poetry. I'd like to share mine with you. (Be gentle - I had to write this under pressure, in class, in ten minutes!) 

A POEM IS JUST INK IN THE SHAPE OF

A splash of ink. Like divided by a

miniature Moses, into a shape of something.

A spot becomes two, then stretches to

a line, forming letters. It draws a naked Venus,

excuses the rage of Caliban.

 

Like a hairbrush and a pocket mirror, words

can be a tool to make one beautiful on a Monday morning,

a tool which lets one admire the result -

the way a dream, or a thought, or a kiss,

never could.

 

They can draw a forest where you get lost

on a long dawn, but whose trees give comfort;

you don't mind being lost.

 

They can be a fire boiling up the soul,

searching for a colourless spot in an

Impressionist painting, and finding

a place to rest from the violence of the world.

 

Nothing more than ink, in the shape of something.

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 19th Feb 2013 14:17

You have a fresh voice!

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Anthony Emmerson

Sun 21st Oct 2012 10:15

Hi Imprisoned Beauty,

I think you were set an impossible task in trying to write a definition of poetry. If you have time to study the discussion boards here then you will see that many attempts have been made over the years, without any convincing result. Poetry seems to be many things to many people, and like an eel, just when you think you've got a grip on it it wriggles through your fingers. However, I'm right with you when you say that it's one of those things you just "feel."

Love the title of this piece, very apt. For just ten minutes - and under pressure I think you've done yourself credit!

Welcome to WOL by the way. Hope you have fun and find friends here.

Regards,
A.E.



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