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Memory Dim

"I am the light that shines twice as bright,
The sword that cuts twice as deep
The running water that heals the wound
The dappled shade that offers calm."
 
Yet light is none too bright,
Illumines none too well,
And though it tries, it hardly serves
To push the darkness back at all.
 
And so it is with memory,
For though I try
I can't recall
Your face as first I saw your grace.
 
So what then is this poor memory
That tells us what we are,
Who we are, where we've been
And how we should behave?
 
The same old fortunes pass us by,
Yet never do we learn
But sit and weep, and seek to find
Where none exists
Some meaning

And next tonight... ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5886)

Thu 26th Feb 2009 17:04

Interesting poem, I like the style, very nice :)

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Noetic-fret!

Sun 11th Jan 2009 14:24

Mike, I really am very impressed and touched by the words you have written, but then, I wouldn't have expected lesser quality from yourself. Poetry often means more to the author than those reading, but in your case, I truly think that the words you have written give insight into your soul, and mean equally the message you are giving, both to the reader and yourself. As Nabila has said, you have obviously given this some thought, but in doing so, you have given the reader much thought (and love), too. An inspiration, and a blessing to read. Thank you for sharing this. If these words be testimony to the amount of depth in feeling you posses, then you have a heart as deep as the well of life itself. Enough said, I have much to learn.

<Deleted User>

Sat 10th Jan 2009 17:32

I really love this poem - beautiful. you are a good writer


Like the inversion and general use of language - you have given it a lot of thought

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