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dont hate. precipitate!

focus
concentrate on me
i want everything you have
my skin becomes porous
your hate is the sewer water i absorb
it helps me grow
i swell with your energy as you weaken
i become light as a cloud
and my being condenses in the sky over your head
i am the black storm that brings down buildings
i cause rivers to break banks
and the ocean to rise up and swallow the earth
i am empowered by your essence - your anger
until it becomes too much
i feel my skin start to bubble
as the weight overcomes me

i rain down onto you
from higher than god knows
with such fury
i make the old testament look like a shower
my retribution tears your skin
the acid downpour is justice
a kind of which has never been seen

next time
bring an umbrella

◄ i wouldn't even survive a nuclear fallout

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Comments

<Deleted User> (5760)

Wed 14th Jan 2009 10:03

Thanks very much Chris, i try to keep a sense of humour when i'm writing about subjects that make me angry or sad.

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Chris Dawson

Wed 14th Jan 2009 09:59

Particularly loved the last two lines - unexpected!
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