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This no longer a home,
Never was the place I wanted to stay,
This world, unfortunate and blue
Looks so inviting from a darkened hue,
But truth persists the witness to the
Rose and thorn of a dying sun.
The blues and greens of
A celestial being gone mad, trapped
Within the junction of Heaven and
Earth, the puncture placed
Through and through again – a
Broken heart.
God smacked, infinite fear
Neither harsh nor serene foretells
A scream within the void, a sea
Of life, set to sea of tears,
Nothing more desired,
But for a bullet run.
Michael J Waite Monday 19th January 2009 0922hrs.
Chris Dawson
Tue 20th Jan 2009 10:59
I keep reading and re-reading your work and never quite get round to leaving a comment. It is definitely and complexly, multi-layered. Like Nabila, I felt I could identify with it, I'm not sure though that I felt a wistful quality - it felt more like a song of despair to me, sad and haunting. But a good read, neverthelss
Thanks for your comments on 'Confetti', all feedback always appreciated.
Cx