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Bad back

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My bad back is back, back to being bad

They run like noses in my family

My mum’s bad back is back, and once my dad

Slipped a disc, face frozen in agony

My brother can’t slack; fact is, his money

Grows from cleaning rows of windows, and so

When he goes up his ladder, mad is he

When his bad back gets badder, don’t you know?

But back to my bad back: in days of snow

Delivering papers, twice daily, I had

A big bag on my shoulder, holding the

Times supplements, uncoupling spine joints: no

Straight back till a year later. Just injured

My back running on park tracks. On sickie…

◄ Not yet home, but dry

The buck stops here ►

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Wed 21st Jan 2009 22:47

May the Angel of The North shine his rusty rays upon your badbackness and bring about an Antonionio (Gormley) curissimo. If that doesn't work take lots of pills and keep up the poetryness.Hope you feel better soon,
Deborah : )

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Tue 20th Jan 2009 16:37

So taking a sickie is your bit of good news for Tuesday of the week is it Antonionioni?

Bet if you tied yourself to that statue behind you for a week, your back'd soon straighten out.
Better still, let me tie you to it instead. ha ha.
Interesting poem.
Janet.x

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winston plowes

Tue 20th Jan 2009 14:08

hi Antonionioni
This must be the only form of enjoyment to be winkled out of a bad back situation. Liked the Ba...Ba...Ba quick rhythm in the 1st and 3rd lines and the uncoupling spine line. In my youth I was a temporary Sunday paper deliverer, didn't last, killer job. Nice to put a face to the rhymes on Sunday night. Winston

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