Warnings

 

Warnings

 

Storms!

We’re all going through storms,

From young to old you can feel the maddening -

Is this the insanity before a cull?

 

If you press your ear to the floor,

You can hear a silent alarm,

A variable bass tone resonating through

Our world,

 

It’s cold,

And the chimes from tree ornaments

No longer soothe – no longer imbue

A false state of calm,

 

No-one,

Is getting life

Everyone, has forgot its meaning,

What celebrations, are there now?

 

Michael J Waite 27th February 2013.

◄ Truth Hurts

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David Blake

Thu 7th Mar 2013 18:23

I like the movement from the line 'our world' to 'it's cold' bridging the gap between the middle two stanzas. A kind of eerie quality about this one which complements its quite short length very well. Keeps it open to all kinds of interpretation. Nice one!

<Deleted User> (10123)

Wed 27th Feb 2013 22:43

Celebrations - off-key tree ornaments - silent alarm - cull - quad-verse thoughts seem a little dark to me. nice piece, ta muchly, nick.

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